But before I get there, I still have to flesh out some of the other characters, and finish with the outline. I will say that I'm going to take Rauk's advice and not flesh out the outline completely. I don't want to lock myself into a narrative that may change as I write out the Main Character's actions and reactions to what's happening.
I believe I have to consider what I want out of both the friends and the handler. Their bios will have to be reflective of the parts I want them to play.
Just to have it handy, here is what I have for an outline so far:
- Introduction
- Learn about the character while he travels to Italy with his friends
- MAYBE foretell some of the story... a friend has heard of a place that sells sex slaves
- End the chapter with him finding the 'resort'
- First transformation
- He gets kidnapped
- They start transforming him into a bigger man
- He meets a fellow kidnapped man and gets to know him
- As he's been kidnapped he fights against them any chance he gets
- He fails some key test and is sent back to be re-evaluated
- He meets his 'handler'
- Second transformation
- His handler tells him that they will be making him into a sex slave... but only briefly hints at the various kinds they can change him into.
- He goes through another transformation, this time into a small weak man
- He tries to go along with the transformation and training figuring that he can escape better once sold
- Through nerves, or maybe through a complete language problem, he fails a key test and is sent back
- Third transformation
- He meets his handler again and they talk
- He meets a girl that will be transformed along with him
- They both fail and are sent back
- Fourth transformation
- Another meeting with the handler
- Another failed transformation
- Fifth transformation
- Another meeting with the handler
- Another transformation where he meets the girl again and is humiliated to find that they will be made over to look similar (big breasts, wide hips, plump lips...)
- She doesn't enjoy the training as a lady's servant so she betrays him, making sure they will move on to the next transformation together
- Sixth transformation
- Another meeting with the handler
- Somehow the betrayal of the handler will come in to play here
- I'm not sure if this will be another transformation, or just training...
- He along with the girl are given training on how to please men
- |He'd meet up with his 'stud' friend again here for a final dose of humiliation
- Though reluctant and humiliated, he passes
- Maybe it works out that their "Men's Sissy slave" is supposed to be embarrassed and humiliated. That could work as it would separate him from the girl as she is too enthusiastic
- Ending
- Once he realizes that there is no more training and that he will be sold as a "Man's Sissy Slave", he struggles against the continued training and practice sessions
- He is sold off.
As I mentioned before, I'm going to have the friends somehow in the ending. Before I get to that though, I want to think of the handler's role. In the most basic way, the handler can either be a friend or a foe. If I play him/her (For the sake of writing/thinking this out I'm going to go with 'him', but I haven't decided on the handler's gender yet) as a friend he would be trying to help the main character accept what they are trying to change him into. The handler has to be OK with the results of all this transformation and training, otherwise he just wouldn't be there. So as a friend, he would be listening to what the main character is going through and try to address each issue. He'd be constantly trying to alleviate the main character's fears while still acknowledging that it's a difficult process to go through. He'd be a shoulder to cry on, a sympathetic ear, and offer kind support. He may even feel bad about what's happening to the main character.
If I play the handler as a foe, it's a more devious character by far. He not only would accept what's going on, he'd revel in it. But a lot of his deviousness wouldn't be revealed until the end. In the first few chapters I'd still look at the handler as offering help. Of seemingly being kind. Underneath that veneer (and possibly unknown to the reader) he'd be using his sessions to find out what is working most effectively on the main character. Finding out what scares or humiliates the main character the most and then setting him up to go through them again and again. Only in the latter chapters (possibly only in the last chapter) would his dark nature come out.
My initial thoughts were leaning toward playing the handler as a foe. Of having his betrayal be a final nail in the main character's 'coffin'. But I think I like having him be a friend more. In a way it's almost more dark that way. Imagine your only 'friend' throughout an ordeal like this is actually pushing you (gently pushing) to accept this fate. To not only accept it, but to embrace it and revel in it. All of the other people working on you have an almost careless indiffernt attitude.. they don't care if you like whats happening to you or not. You'd naturally cling to anyone showing you kindness. Anyone that expresses interest in your feelings.
And the more I think about it, the more I like the handler being a man. I think the dichotomy of a man gently and even lovingly convincing another man to accept being a sissy slave would be fun to flesh out and write.
So... now that I've worked out that the handler will be a kind friendly man, lets give him a bio.
Just as with the main character bio, none of this is set in stone. I'll change any detail if I find it needs to be changed, but this will help me have the character of the handler be more than a cardboard cutout.
I'm starting with the premise that this person is working for an organization that takes people and transforms them into slaves. More often than not, sexual slaves regardless of their starting gender. I picture him being older than the main character, but not 'old'. Let's say he's in his mid to late 30s. Old enough to have been educated and to have some experience in this field, but not old enough that he is running the place.
Looks/Bodytype: As I'm not going to be changing him, I can consider more of what he looks like. He's fit and handsome, but not a body builder or model. He's rather tall at six foot two and has dull brown hair. His eyes act as the windows into his soul and are a deep blue. His face is kind and has the beginning of both laugh lines around his mouth and eyes as well as lines developing on his forehead from frowning. He doesn't wear a mustache or beard, but often avoids shaving leaving him with an almost constant five o'clock shadow.
Wealth: He doesn't come from 'money'. He worked very hard to earn his degree and get educated. He gets paid well for what he does (think in terms of low six figures), but lives modestly. |He works hard and focuses on his career not for the monetary benefit but because he believes in it and honestly wants to help those getting transformed.
Family: He is alone. His parents passed away before he graduated High School and he had no siblings. He used to look at his friends from college as family, but has been separated from them for years. He dates occasionally but has yet to find a woman that he's both attracted to and that he has any emotional connection with. While he still searches for the 'love of his life', he accepts that he may never find a wife and may forever remain a bachelor. I may even play this up as he starts becoming attracted to the main character while forming an emotional bond to him.
Mentality: He is the definition of kindness. He is slow to anger and quick to laugh. He doesn't look at what he is doing as 'forcing' someone to transform against their will, instead he looks at it as helping people accept a life that they are better suited to. A life that will be better than their previous existence. He's not naive though... he knows that there are people that go through this process that will never fully embrace their new life... that will be changed against their will and never know happiness again. But he weighs these people against all those that he CAN help find happiness and accepts that he can't change their fate.
Intelligence: I think of him as similar to the main character here. He's smart, but no where near a genius. He worked hard at a state school to get his education as a psychiatrist. He never earned a license though as he was hired on in this organization. Here he worked with others and learned how best to help those going through the transformative and training process.
Sexuality: He is attracted to women. While at college he thought only of the genetic description of women, but once he came to this organization he opened up and realized that he's attracted to women regardless of genetic gender. He sees men completely transformed externally into women, sissies and completely genetic women as all the same thing. The organization has given him experience in most kinks and fetishes so that he can better help the people he's handling.
Religion: He is an agnostic. He has no faith in God or any Supreme Being, but doesn't discount any who do believe. He was raised in a Christian household, but religion was never pushed on to him. He hasn't attended any church for decades.
Backstory: While in his last year of his residency his best friend was kidnapped. As he though of him as a brother he spend considerable time and effort in tracking him down. When he finally caught up to him it was at one of the organization's training facilities. He had hoped to free his friend, but found out that not only was he happy in his new sissy life... he found out that his friend had no desire to be rescued. His friend was in fact looking forward to being purchased and living the rest of his life as a sissy slave to a powerful man. This rocked the handler's world, but he couldn't find anything in his training that said such a transformation wasn't possible. When the organization found out his intent of stealing one of their products they put him into the same program, but quickly realized that he would make a far better handler than slave. Initially he was still a prisoner, but as he began to throw himself into work, helping the new slaves, a trust grew between him and the organization. He's been a free man for years now and has no intent of ever leaving his current 'job'.
I see the handler as being another overall good guy. Yes, he's a little twisted, but he works from a good intent. He knows that if he wasn't doing this job, that the organization would find someone else, and that they may well do the job while offering the slaves no compassion whatsoever. He is honestly happy to see the slaves accept and even embrace their new lives and is as equally sad when a slave doesn't accept it.
I can easily see him having two different roles. The first is the most basic... he's a good guy helping the main character accept his fate as he does to all the slaves. But I also see him possibly 'falling' for the main character. That his kindness grows from the standard default position he takes with all of the slaves and moves more into love.
I'll have to tackle that choice when I write out their scenes together.
Obviously this changes the outline as there isn't a direct betrayal now. The main character may still feel betrayed as the handler doesn't 'save' him, but it won't be with ill intent from the handler.
I think that's enough for now. Next up will either be giving the friends a bio, or updating the outline.
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